We have been talking about words on the lot, as of late. What words move you? What words send you into a heap of tissue, or into anger? How much that we say makes a difference to your life?
Your words burn me
like the hot, vivid laser
dry ice,
copper-etching acid on
the swelling nipples of a
forgotten woman.
they create storms of light
in my nervous system,
like molten lava, aurora,
moonlight reflected on snow
and the dawn.
Life resolves to a series
of identical variations
like orgasm-revelation.
God becomes intimate
like the spring rain
the light sparkling brook
the softness
of your inner thigh.
3 comments:
"copper etching acid on the swelling nipples of a forgotten woman." Beautifully phrased Angel and a wonderful start to what I know is going to be fascinating and compelling reading. As individual words I love "Tempestuous. Tease and tied". But of them all right now I think just two tiny words do it for me: "Lonely" and of course, that four letter wonder - "Love(d)". They both conjure up images and people that I have been and known this past week.
XX
Angel you have achieved the impossible - I am speechless!
Told you you were more talented than I could ever dream of!
Hugs
xxx
Angel - a little mixture of ideas here, but somehow it all works. Can't write poetry my ass! lol
There are actually very few words that truly upset me. It depends on how they're used. Any word used with disrespect makes me ill.
As for words I love - any name that makes me smile, that warms my heart, that makes me want to dance with happiness.
I know - I'm shameless! LOL
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